:: lylyzz
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So, when I write things, I can only ever get like two really accurate and well though out pieces of feedback, and I was wondering if anyone on here would mind giving me some on some things that I write? Or if anyone had any tips for getting more than "I like it." I'd also be happy to return the favor if anyone want's my opinion on anything. 
"I do what I do because I feel it's best. And if it makes me happy... Well all the better."
Try to do something unforgettable today. Even if you fail at what you wanted to do, you'll still have amazing memories.
My little tumblr hole: http://bethecrayon.tumblr.com/
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Post: #671196  , Mon 30 Jul 12, 6:00PM |
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I would!  . Post away!
Non Timebo Mala
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Post: #671197 , Mon 30 Jul 12, 7:03PM |
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:: Kuuipo
:: QA10 Community Goddess | |
I shall :3 Pooost?
"The past can hurt. You can either run from it or learn from it." ~Rafiki
“Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter, and those who matter don’t mind.” ~Dr. Seuss
~Clicking this link will bring you to a very special place and you should click it because click it.|
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Post: #671214 , Mon 30 Jul 12, 10:02PM |
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:: Milababy
:: QA4 A spot of tea please, Alfred! | |
Me three lol I know how well I'll do but I'll try my best!
5/16/10
If I had a penny every time I thought of you, I'd be a millionaire.
My imaginary friend thinks you have some serious problems.
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Post: #671217 , Mon 30 Jul 12, 10:17PM |
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Editing is kind of my "thing," so if you want serious feedback, feel free to message me with your pieces any time. I'm always nice, but I'm always thorough.
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Post: #671225 , Mon 30 Jul 12, 11:33PM |
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Yeah I get the same feeling, no-one gives me feedback either D: Guys when you read my stories please give me honest opinions.
There is no hope without salvation, there is no life without destruction, in this desolate world we can only rely on the unknown for our minds shame the very ground.
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Post: #671251 , Tue 31 Jul 12, 2:09AM |
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:: lylyzz
:: QA4 A spot of tea please, Alfred! | |
Two of my favorite things are posted on my blog (so, you know, feel free to check that out if you'd like) but I tried to write this poem one day when two of my friends were extremely upset. Actually, one of them is you, Courtney.
Hello There
Hello there.
You are important.
I can’t tell you how,
And I can’t tell you exactly why
But you are important.
And I thought you should know that.
Hello there.
You are loved.
I don’t know much about you,
But someone out there needs you
And you will be loved by them.
And I thought you should know that.
Hello there.
You are you.
I don’t know you,
But I can tell you one thing;
Being you is the most important thing you will do.
And I thought you should know that.
Hello there.
I wrote this for you.
I wrote this to tell you
You are important and loved and you,
And that I think you should know this.
"I do what I do because I feel it's best. And if it makes me happy... Well all the better."
Try to do something unforgettable today. Even if you fail at what you wanted to do, you'll still have amazing memories.
My little tumblr hole: http://bethecrayon.tumblr.com/
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Post: #671313 , Tue 31 Jul 12, 5:45AM |
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:: Kuuipo
:: QA10 Community Goddess | |
I know you didn't just want "I liked this" as a response. But hell; I really liked this. It can speak to anyone and it gave me goosebumps. Probably one of my favourite poems I've read on here. It's simple and sweet but really moving. :3
"The past can hurt. You can either run from it or learn from it." ~Rafiki
“Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter, and those who matter don’t mind.” ~Dr. Seuss
~Clicking this link will bring you to a very special place and you should click it because click it.|
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Post: #671432 , Tue 31 Jul 12, 6:27PM |
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:: lylyzz
:: QA4 A spot of tea please, Alfred! | |
Awe, thank you Dylan! I don't really mind if people want to say they like it, but I like to know why as well. I'm glad you like it so much though.
"I do what I do because I feel it's best. And if it makes me happy... Well all the better."
Try to do something unforgettable today. Even if you fail at what you wanted to do, you'll still have amazing memories.
My little tumblr hole: http://bethecrayon.tumblr.com/
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Post: #671455 , Tue 31 Jul 12, 8:39PM |
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:: lylyzz
:: QA4 A spot of tea please, Alfred! | |
By the way, I just want to say that if any of you want to post something on here or send it to me, I'd love to read it. Meanwhile, here's one more I just found that I wrote a while ago.
The Little Things
Every day gets a little bit better
Every moment gets progressively worse
Every morning we start writing a letter
That will be reflected on as we enter the hearse
All smiles are tinged with sadness
All loss begets a gain
All the time we face a new madness
But the results all stay the same
However,
If fish never swam up stream
If every curiosity killed the cat
If every challenge killed a dream
And no batters went up to bat
No progress would be made
No task could get done
No new computers or space escapades
Or anything else under the sun
So,
Though we suffer every day
Though we must deal with the melancholy
Though the endless record will play
It’s the little things that determine what is to be
Reflect on the light, not darkness
Reflect on the good and not the bad
Reflect on the small things in life’s caress
And never dwell on boring or the sad
"I do what I do because I feel it's best. And if it makes me happy... Well all the better."
Try to do something unforgettable today. Even if you fail at what you wanted to do, you'll still have amazing memories.
My little tumblr hole: http://bethecrayon.tumblr.com/
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Post: #671463 , Tue 31 Jul 12, 9:37PM |
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How to know when you like a guy.
Lez-be-honest
Three's A Crowd... or is it?
Lily Helena Knight
Things that grow
Just so.
My new life
Trip to the zoo!
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