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I wrote this poem a while ago but I really love it cause it really describes how I feel about someone. I hope you guys enjoy it 
The Aurora
By Gabriel
Bright amber glimmered from the eminent horizon
Gold as the morning sun itself
Solidified honey on his skin; a rarity that I thought never possible
Hair like the burnished auburn, softer than the plumes off a duckling
Scent stronger than coffee, but as sweet as chocolate; I can't resist
Personality like cinnamon, pure like a golden vein
Flecks of tawny foliage upon his head
Blushing softly like the tone of garnet
Eyes as dark as mahogany, jeweled and precious to me
I will never understand why he only came in the morn
To become my sun and warmth
And soon die in the eve, only to be reborn
In the sunlight after, this I remember
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Post: #649206  , Mon 14 May 12, 1:36PM |
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Wonderfully written, Gabriel! Your wording is superb!!
"It's better to burp and taste it, than fart and waste it!"
-Larry the Cable Guy
"If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything!" -Wiseman(Scott Glenn) in Sucker Punch
"You Jezebel! I pray George Lucas drowns you in his white man gold!"-very good friend of mine texted that to a guy who was pissing him off
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Post: #649224 , Mon 14 May 12, 5:39PM |
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Thank you so much! Much appreciated
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Post: #649286 , Mon 14 May 12, 10:21PM |
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OMG!!! THAT WAS EPIC!!!  more please!!!
To see us dance is to hear our hearts speak- Hopi Indian saying
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Post: #649288 , Mon 14 May 12, 10:37PM |
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One word FAB. Nothing more to say, FAB
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Post: #649291 , Mon 14 May 12, 10:39PM |
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Awww thanks guys :] I'll be sure to post more poems!
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Post: #649421 , Tue 15 May 12, 12:17PM |
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Not much of a Blogger
That one life-long scar...
Three's A Crowd... or is it?
Lily Helena Knight
Things that grow
Just so.
My new life
Trip to the zoo!
![Liz is dancing :). [Avatar]](images/?img=avatars/16504wee.jpg?i=0){kind=small}
