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Jurion Send Jurion a private message
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I wanna make music and love in that order
You inspire me with your lack of anything but those two things
God damn your simple orbit
I try to think about how to do that but then I think about trying
And there’s so much to try to do
that I would have to try

You are beautiful in your cabin with homemade instruments
And no melodic complexes
I am beautiful because I will chase that until
I have the words and no time
at the same time
Roses are red
Violets are blue
In Soviet Russia
Poem write you
  Post: #377904 Link to this post, Sun 18 Apr 10, 6:21AM
Emmy Send Emmy a private message
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This is really good!!!!
Little Billie was a chemist
Little Billie is no more
For what Billie thought was H2O
Was H2SO4

I'd like to quote V for Vendetta for a moment.
"Who ever you are, whoever is reading this, know this: I love you."
And you all may be strangers, but I still love you all, even if I haven't met you.
  Post: #377911 Link to this post, Sun 18 Apr 10, 7:10AM
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I liked this. It was simply amazing Emoticon: Smile :)
  Post: #378645 Link to this post, Mon 19 Apr 10, 5:27PM
Carolyn Send Carolyn a private message
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Kudos, this is lovely.
  Post: #378668 Link to this post, Mon 19 Apr 10, 7:19PM
Megan Send Megan a private message
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10 points.

Emoticon: Smile :)

i like your style. It reads well, without having a predictable sort of rhythm. i don't know how to express what i'm trying to say. but i think you understand. We write sort of similarly, like this, and probably for the same reason and with the same underlying aesthetic appeal. Maybe. Or not.

Haha, really don't know.

But that was lovely.
  Post: #378815 Link to this post, Tue 20 Apr 10, 12:53AM
nicky Send nicky a private message
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i like this Emoticon: Smile :)
  Post: #378817 Link to this post, Tue 20 Apr 10, 12:59AM
Jurion Send Jurion a private message
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Thanks people.

Appreciate the extra words, Megan. I wish I could say that I have a "style" but not too many of my poems resemble each other.

I'll keep posting. And I'll look for your stuff too :]
Roses are red
Violets are blue
In Soviet Russia
Poem write you
  Post: #378838 Link to this post, Tue 20 Apr 10, 1:33AM
Megan Send Megan a private message
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Perhaps i should say 'this style' then. Though, i know what you mean.
  Post: #378841 Link to this post, Tue 20 Apr 10, 1:43AM
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